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the rainbow in my sheets by ~fadedindego:iconfadedindego:



I mess around with lonliness often. He's always there though. I'm not sure I keep the name in track; twenty six letters with millions of mixtures. Colors a fairly safe way to go, but i can never recall between brown, or blue, or green.
Either way
your lips taste sweet, your tongue thick in my mouth and although your touch sometimes vague, it has me trembling with bittersweet satisfaction.  
May I? Can I have your heart? Everything I said, I meant it.
I thuink I caught your tongue tied once or twice, or maybe I just lost your...
soul
         heart
                      love
                               empty blank, nothing
whatever it is you give in return with your emaculant act, unless, of course...
You've gone cold
      once again
  like before....
odds say, "YES!"
We love to play these games
over
and
over
and
over
I suppose, it's because the sexual appetite keeps its fuel in disregard?
Maybe once we could fuel it and not empty the space in between. That's probably crazy talk, Im sorry

Close your eyes, forget names. It's switching with every battle under the covers. Everytime it's still passionate; growing sweet.
Take me, whoever you are,
I am
undoubtfully yours.
©2004-2009 ~fadedindego
:iconfadedindego:

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yeah.


it's easy to figure out, somewhat why dont like it.
i dont know

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:iconfadedindego:
thanks, and thanks for the fav also
:iconkototama:
The form you used was vague and let my imagination run wild yet structured enough to understand every emotion that poured forth. I now understand this predicament vicariously through your poem.

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Kototama |

All is full of love.
:iconfadedindego:
thanks for the fav, and the comment.
:iconthefurrez:
I added this to my favs.. But never got around to commenting. So, i'll do so now. God I love this.. Its fucking beautiful.. Fucking brilliant.. God.. I love it.
~Furrz

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Bloody tears mildly exhiled for forsakenly pale lips.. caressing the softest touch upon mine, for sin is the ultimate bliss.
:iconfadedindego:
thanks. I saw you added it to your favorites and i meant to thank you and look around your gallery but it seemed everytime i got on, i had to get right off. thanks for the comment.. glad you liked it.
:iconthefurrez:
No problem, i've been more apathetic then usual lately, so it takes alot to get my attention.. I have also been spending more time on DA. Your poem caught my eye, and tugged at me mentally.. thank -you-.

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Bloody tears mildly exhiled for forsakenly pale lips.. caressing the softest touch upon mine, for sin is the ultimate bliss.

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January 15, 2004
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